Thursday, November 5, 2009

Thinking is Evil

allow the heart to think,
and it will bleed.
the blood will not be red,
but the color of devil.

11 comments:

  1. heart is meant to feel not for thinking.....

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  2. heart is a metaphor here for pain!!and heart is also used as to lay stress on the fact as to what function a heart n mind do but totally in poetic form!!

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  3. " heart is a metaphor here for pain!!and heart is also used as to lay stress on the fact as to what function a heart n mind do but totally in poetic form!! "

    sounds like a fuckin anatomy !!

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  4. @ lonely planet..that's wat the chomland is refining in me-the art of interpretation ,which they rarely care about!!

    where r u??
    grade 1 hell or grade 2 hell??

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  5. didn't i replied this n you deleted for being outrageously explicit !!

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  6. was it really me or your own suicidal self??

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  7. lovely striking words...thoughts indeed has so much power!

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  8. Hello thr...liked the concept of "the color of devil". That's exactly the color of reason not pain. You have very beautifully depicted this concept in metaphors. forget explanations..let poetry speak for itself.

    @ Heavenly Muse: Think you missed the word in the begining of the poem "allow"....if you read it again you will get an answer to your comment.

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  9. @tina ma'am: i agree,poetry speaks for itself!

    thank you ma'am.

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  10. nd wen wil u learn frm dis.....

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  11. the day u stop thinking, u stop living!

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